Yen Cress

Rookie (3/9/43 / San Francisco, California)

One December Night - Poem by Yen Cress

Far brighter than the suns's sharp rays,
Far larger than immense,
A pinpoint perforates the haze
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Comments about One December Night by Yen Cress

  • (9/29/2007 10:49:00 PM)

    Yen, there is a majesty in your writing that impresses as much as the words excite. A powerful and lingering impression of contained imagery. Rgds, Ivan (Report)Reply

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  • (9/24/2007 2:04:00 PM)

    I liked this, it was so pretty! I'm not religious, but your poem sounded very nice!

    'Far larger than immense'
    This was interesting. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it, :)
    Great work!
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  • Elysabeth Faslund (9/24/2007 1:26:00 PM)

    Oh, but you have put into words a grand thing! Realization of the immense time span above us mortals! We have only to look up to see infinity...as our far ancestors did, with the same awe. Wonderful work! ! xxElysabeth (Report)Reply

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