Thursday, June 4, 2009

One More Chance (A Villanelle) Comments

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Do not leave me because I lost the knack.
I’ll learn the tricks of foreplay that are subtle.
Give me just one more chance in the sack.

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John Lyday
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Smiley Hooker 16 June 2009

I think your knack is knocking back in this piece, dear Poet. Entertaining! Thanks for sharing.: -)

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

Funny and very witty. John i like how you always know what youre doing with poetry and why, titles and all :) Thank you for sharing.

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Fiona Davidson 04 June 2009

Excellent write John...10+++

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