Reggie fambro mcclain III

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One More Day - Poem by Reggie fambro mcclain III

I'm so sad and depressed
Is all I want to do is rest
I go to sleep at night
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Comments about One More Day by Reggie fambro mcclain III

  • Greenwolfe 1962 (2/27/2009 3:58:00 PM)

    I believe the writer is not quite sure what to write here. There seem to be two messages at once being delivered from his head. Perhaps he needs to write two more focused poems. Anyway. The structure was good and both messages
    got through. Though neither was as well developed as it could have been.

    GW62
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  • ♥ Loved Sunshine Princess♥ (4/7/2008 7:12:00 PM)

    Very NIce writen! Good JOb! KEep up the good work! ;)

    ~Sunshine
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