Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 206,566 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Onset - Poem by Kelly Kurt

On its closest approach to the sun
Tilt negates proximity
Northern hemisphere sags under dense, cold air
The accumulated warmth of summer
Stored in soil and rock
Slowly dissipates
Snow fields swell, quickening the cooling
Reflecting warming light back into space
Longer nights passively participate in the collusion
Set in motion eons ago
Cyclically repeated
Winter, the protracted season, commences

Topic(s) of this poem: life, nature, seasons

Comments about Onset by Kelly Kurt

  • Pamela Sinicrope (11/13/2015 11:34:00 AM)

    And so it was....the protracted season begins. This is a lovely translation of the science of winter told in poetry. I love this. This is something only Kelly Kurt can do in a way that respects the science and the art. Well done! :) (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/13/2015 12:12:00 PM)

    Thank you, Pam. As a child, I was always amazed that we could be millions of miles closer to the sun but freeze our patooties off in winter. : -)

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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (11/13/2015 9:27:00 AM)

    Was it that one wanted Autumn to disappear fast and winter to appear soon? ? Was it because one was loving winter more than Autumn? I wouldn't think so. Perhaps same one will be hoping the winter to go and spring to come in afterwards. Poet sees how expectations keep the life driving on. Quite inspiring. Thanks Kelly for sharing.X (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/13/2015 12:11:00 PM)

    Yes, expectations and experience change one's outlook

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/13/2015 7:36:00 AM)

    A nice description of seasons cycle......................... (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/13/2015 12:10:00 PM)

    Of course, opposite in the southern hemisphere

  • (11/13/2015 3:18:00 AM)

    climate change can make it better or worse
    thanks Kelly
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    Kelly Kurt (11/13/2015 12:09:00 PM)

    This year, a strong El Nino is supposed to keep my region warmer than average

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/13/2015 1:10:00 AM)

    Northern hemisphere sags under dense, cold air. Setting in motion and bringing emotion with marvelous expression winter blooms with wise hope and attitudes in this interesting imagery....10 (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/13/2015 12:08:00 PM)

    Thank you. Winter is not my favorite season but it can be beautiful

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/13/2015 1:05:00 AM)

    Welcome winter, a season change over, Nature and life purging yet again in this beautiful poem.....Great imagery and nice description, Thanks for sharing your thoughts. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/13/2015 12:06:00 PM)

    At my latitude, four seasons are quite distinct. Winter seems to last 50% longer than any other season though

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

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