Per. Nig.


Organ Donation

Poem by Per. Nig.

I whispered
Talk to me
Help me
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Comments about Organ Donation by Per. Nig.

  • Tsira Goge (10/30/2008 2:55:00 PM)

    Very touching whisper.... 10
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  • Seema Chowdhury (10/6/2008 1:23:00 AM)

    very nice. i enjoyed. Eid Mubarak to you and your family.(Report)Reply

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  • Jessica Rosalie Smith (10/4/2008 9:56:00 AM)

    i really like this poem especially 'you sighed i cried rainy eyes replied'..however, i don't really understand the 'do that' line i think that part needs a bit improving so that the poem flows a little but other than that good job! =)(Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/2/2008 6:31:00 AM)

    Heart melts when someone says ' i love you'(Report)Reply

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  • Shani Bogamuwa (10/1/2008 8:37:00 PM)

    I like the way it's listed
    it's sweet the emotion
    slightly bitter yet sweet(Report)Reply

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  • Lousa Deyzel (10/1/2008 9:36:00 AM)

    it is written exelint i love the way u play with the words it is exelent,
    and the tears and the heart tells it all.i love it.
    but then u have to have a knolage of poems to understand it.(Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/1/2008 9:26:00 AM)

    New taste/newstyle with full of love.........10+(Report)Reply

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  • Caterpillar MC (10/1/2008 8:52:00 AM)

    You have expressed the idea in simple words, and yet got the message across. Good one.(Report)Reply

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  • Lynda Robson (10/1/2008 8:27:00 AM)

    Written from the heart, as always touching and wise,
    10
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  • M M (10/1/2008 1:48:00 AM)

    A very touching poem, whose last word sums up the most difficult part...
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  • Anjali Sinha (10/1/2008 1:26:00 AM)

    heart wrenching indeed
    +10 regards anjalie
    (read mine too THIS ONE IS FOR ME)(Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/1/2008 12:13:00 AM)

    A moving composition.

    'Help me
    To donate faith
    To donate heart'

    10 for this beautiful work.(Report)Reply

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  • Vilma Xelin (9/30/2008 10:18:00 PM)

    sweet inspiration to think this way about others.....(Report)Reply

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/30/2008 7:27:00 PM)

    It's a good cause.I gave you a ten.(Report)Reply

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  • Thad Wilk (9/30/2008 7:06:00 PM)

    Ah, you donate your faith and heart - to love! Great read Shiraz!
    Best wishes! 10
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  • Julie Dant (9/30/2008 4:37:00 PM)

    I like this...I feel the pain.. not sure of it's ultimate meaning however..but I like the simplicity of your words...; 0)(Report)Reply

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