Charles Darnell

St Martinsville, Louisiana
Charles Darnell
St Martinsville, Louisiana
Sunday, June 19, 2016

Orlando's Blood Comments

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In the early morning hours
the blood dries from arterial red
to sullen black
on the floor,

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Charles Darnell
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 September 2016
Wow makes me think its about the compassionate act of donating blood as opposed to war shedding of blood. Great wording and superb freeverse meter here. Nice to read u again. Do pls review my latest too on eclipse.
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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2016
A powerful and well written piece, Charles. Thank you
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Charles Darnell 31 July 2016
Thank you very much, Kelly.
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Bri Edwards 20 June 2016
and i look forward to giving my blood at the bloodmobile here soon, but not for Orlando. just for 'whomever', though i hope my blood does not keep some old codger alive who would be more good (in my humble opinion) to society if he croaked. [no offense meant towards frogs] this is a finely-written account of the aftermath of madness. this shall make a fine addition to June's showcase. THANKS. bri :) and to MyPoemList
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Charles Darnell 20 June 2016
Thank you, Bri.
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