Ted Sheridan


Our Father In Heaven Please Save Our Daughter From Herself - Poem by Ted Sheridan

Daughter of ours
Destroyer
Heartbreaker
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Comments about Our Father In Heaven Please Save Our Daughter From Herself by Ted Sheridan

  • (10/12/2007 7:20:00 PM)

    Ted, I feel your pain, I am right now going thru this same thing with my 13 year old son. I am his stepfather, but I think alot of his hate & aggression stems from his real fathers lack of paticapation in his life.
    I wish you all the best, and god knows I feel for both you and yourwife. I know how bad this hurts for me, let alone how its killing his mother. This one really touched home for me as well
    'Keep on inking the Pages'
    Poison
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  • (10/12/2007 12:45:00 PM)

    Sweetheart that hits home. Hard. I'm ashamed to say it is like looking in the mirror a few years ago. I wish I had looked into my parents' eyes instead.

    Good news though. They're my best friends now.....

    t
    xxx
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  • (10/12/2007 10:44:00 AM)

    this defiantly held my attention.
    Was able to see the whole innocent
    in my mind clearly. Not to mention
    the pain one would have to feel to write
    such a piece.
    Nice writing here.
    True or not, none of my business.
    as a poem worth reading more then once
    for me shows how to follow through with a thought.
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  • (10/12/2007 7:59:00 AM)

    you make it real, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , (Report)Reply

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  • (10/12/2007 7:35:00 AM)

    Ouch! please tell me this isn't true?
    Hugs
    Anna xxx
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