Thayne Tuason

Veteran Poet - 1,157 Points (1973)

Our Lives Together... - Poem by Thayne Tuason

the threat

of a future

with you

loomed over us

as old ladies do

with the putrid breath

of unremorseful



you would not

but no lie was beyond you

though evidence

of other truths

sickened anyone near

for your breath


it was

your breath

Topic(s) of this poem: alcoholism, lies

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Our Lives Together... by Thayne Tuason

  • Drtony Brahmin (2/15/2016 4:23:00 AM)

    the threat

    of a future

    with you

    loomed over usm ... crass realizations of a life is depicted.. thank you for this poem tony

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 15, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, February 15, 2016

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