Friday, April 14, 2006

Out Of Ink Comments

Rating: 2.8

'How could you'
Leave me alone in the dark
with no soul?
agony, I must swallow it whole,


Robert Araya
Mary-Elizabeth Conn 14 April 2006

This is a beautiful poem! I know people have been saying you should improve this on the forum but I really like this poem! Everybody views poetry differntly adn I really really like it! Keep up the good work mate! :) Rock on!

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