bella gellina


Pain - Poem by bella gellina

We all have scars on our hearts
From the times we were hurt
Scars of people dying
Scars of being left alone
Scars haunting us of things we regret
Scars showing the pain of saying goodbye
We try to cover these scars
Hide them from the rest of the world
So no one knows the truth
Hoping that soon,
Even we won’t know the truth...


Comments about Pain by bella gellina

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (4/2/2008 7:44:00 PM)


    Sometimes, our acceptance of what is truth, allows us to somehow move on, as if nothing ever happened....Commendable work, bella. Smooth, crisp, mellifluous structural work.....One thread of well-intended advice based on my own background...Imagery, adds depth & allows the reader to see what you see when you write...and ultimately what you want your readership to invision when thet read you.Utelize depictive, vivdid magery, when you write poetics.Pictorial ambience is like the icing on an otherwise, well-baked, but blan cake.
    An all-around job well done.

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008..
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008



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