When everything seems to go dark
I can see clearly
I can feel it all
Unspoken words bounce off the prison in my mind
These are the sincere words of a secretive soul. A soul that is suffering. Perhaps
a pain that is becoming too much to endure. It needs to escape somehow. Though I don't see it happening here. At least not anytime soon. A great reading,
by the way.
Quite a bit of emotion. You can almost feel it. Very cool
a continuous flow of words that can go intrinsic the mind. i love this piece
This in particular has wordings that like Fiona said, 'breathtaking'. Diliberate and purelu thought. Nice :) !
wow now this is simply breathtaking in its phrasing Vanessa...beautiful thank you...Fi 10+++
a catharsis of pain...end over...this guy needs a 'Gun In The Blueberry Pie'
I like how you express your self! it is a sad poem but yet theres something importend in it, a very well written poem! !
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