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Pain

is loving him
really worth the
pain of
losing him?

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Sicelo Sithole 17 April 2009

I still beleive that from this poem 'pain', can still come something extraordinary, espacially from a poet like you...i agree with Roy, just need more refinement and 'content' as far as the poetry is concerned.

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Rory Hudson 14 April 2009

As with the other one Londiwe, it needs a bit more poetry in it, I feel. Rather too simple and prosaic at present.

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