Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

Rookie (03-12-1991 / Nagpur)

Pain Of Heart - Poem by Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

It beats, again it beats
sounds as someone beat
It bawl, but no one hear
Only, came out a tear
Something latent
which is inexpressible
And yea, not adorable
Lonely hearts pain bellow
but a wayward, never gripe
Feelings find way to insertion
now, its time for salvation

Before a itch rouse
for a pleasant row
Let it repose on the bed of rosette
Its tenderness will heal the pain
no loss, no gain
Unaware from the entire mundaneness
and nobody beside with sorrowfulness
So, the count down trigger
it roar twitter
With renounced hope, heartbeat stop


Comments about Pain Of Heart by Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

  • Ayush Tiwari (6/8/2012 2:22:00 PM)

    SIMPLY awesome.....! ! !
    Highly innovative.....10on 10...B-)
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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (3/12/2012 10:59:00 AM)

    thanks a lot Sagar......... :)) (Report)Reply

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  • Sagar Shelar (3/11/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    Really nice poem. You express your feelings very well. Little bit complicated it looks. Your writing style is so nice. keep it up.... (Report)Reply

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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/27/2012 11:08:00 AM)

    Hey! ....thanks a ton Romeo....your comments really appreciated me a lot...n literally I need such a support.... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/27/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    thanks Deep and Megs.... :)))))
    thanks alot for reading
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  • Megs Poems (2/26/2012 10:23:00 PM)

    amazing Ahana! ! you really write well..! :) (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della ValleRomeo Della Valle (2/26/2012 2:07:00 PM)

    This sad but heart touching write has become your stepping stone to freely enter into the Poetry World! WELCOME! Your talent is clearly shown in this amazing write! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City.

    http: //www.romeodellavalle.com
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  • Deep Mukherjee (2/26/2012 2:03:00 PM)

    nice flow of emotions :) keep writing :) (Report)Reply

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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/26/2012 1:53:00 PM)

    thanks Dave...thanks for reading.. :) (Report)Reply

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  • Kevin Halls (2/26/2012 1:47:00 PM)

    A bit of a confusing poem to be honest but full of expressive words which give it a decent flow. (Report)Reply

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  • Dave Walker (2/26/2012 1:28:00 PM)

    A Great poem, a good choice of words.
    A great write.
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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/26/2012 2:40:00 AM)

    thanks Okoye and Olivia for comments.... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Okoye Charles ChukwudiOkoye Charles Chukwudi (2/25/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    nice poem...though a bit complex (for me)
    I can see the allitrations, good flow of words..
    Keep it up..kudos
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  • Olivia Thimes (2/25/2012 4:03:00 PM)

    your poem is amazing and you are obviously very talented (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 25, 2012



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