Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

Rookie (03-12-1991 / Nagpur)

Pain Of Heart - Poem by Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

It beats, again it beats
sounds as someone beat
It bawl, but no one hear
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Comments about Pain Of Heart by Surbhi Bawaria (Ahana)

  • Ayush Tiwari (6/8/2012 2:22:00 PM)

    SIMPLY awesome.....! ! !
    Highly innovative.....10on 10...B-)
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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (3/12/2012 10:59:00 AM)

    thanks a lot Sagar......... :)) (Report)Reply

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  • Sagar Shelar (3/11/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    Really nice poem. You express your feelings very well. Little bit complicated it looks. Your writing style is so nice. keep it up.... (Report)Reply

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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/27/2012 11:08:00 AM)

    Hey! ....thanks a ton Romeo....your comments really appreciated me a lot...n literally I need such a support.... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/27/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    thanks Deep and Megs.... :)))))
    thanks alot for reading
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  • Megs Poems (2/26/2012 10:23:00 PM)

    amazing Ahana! ! you really write well..! :) (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della ValleRomeo Della Valle (2/26/2012 2:07:00 PM)

    This sad but heart touching write has become your stepping stone to freely enter into the Poetry World! WELCOME! Your talent is clearly shown in this amazing write! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City.

    http: //www.romeodellavalle.com
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  • Deep Mukherjee (2/26/2012 2:03:00 PM)

    nice flow of emotions :) keep writing :) (Report)Reply

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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/26/2012 1:53:00 PM)

    thanks Dave...thanks for reading.. :) (Report)Reply

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  • Kevin Halls (2/26/2012 1:47:00 PM)

    A bit of a confusing poem to be honest but full of expressive words which give it a decent flow. (Report)Reply

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  • Dave Walker (2/26/2012 1:28:00 PM)

    A Great poem, a good choice of words.
    A great write.
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  • Surbhi Bawaria (ahana)Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) (2/26/2012 2:40:00 AM)

    thanks Okoye and Olivia for comments.... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Okoye Charles ChukwudiOkoye Charles Chukwudi (2/25/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    nice poem...though a bit complex (for me)
    I can see the allitrations, good flow of words..
    Keep it up..kudos
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  • Olivia Thimes (2/25/2012 4:03:00 PM)

    your poem is amazing and you are obviously very talented (Report)Reply

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