Saturday, June 2, 2012

Paradise Comments

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I wandered a lot to find
A land called paradise, a mirage
But an echo arouse from behind
My feelings which resembled a marsh.

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cherassery damodaran binish
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Eindaray Kyaw 31 August 2012

The mirage soon appeared as a mirror And showing what is inside in me Suddenly i realized in a horror That my paradise is inside in me...........I like this verse!

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