art oOe Poem by jen capaldi

art oOe

Rating: 3.5


Crying alone
the rain pours
confused
I lay
Not knowing where
Where you could be
stolen
out of my arms
taken
away
Never to be seen
Your voice
echoes
through
my
mind
Your memory
fades away
I am lost
I need you here
For protection
selfish
how selfish
I am
I love you
Always I will
please
come
back
Please ignore them
Ignore their warnings
pass
them
by.....
Enter my world
again
join
me
I never wanted pain
happieness
has
disapeared......



Help me find it
once again
please
overlook
them
Place your gaze upon me
my tears won't stop
my eyes
fixated
upon you
The one I love
Please don't stop my tears
simply
brush
them
away......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Winnie Angel 23 August 2009

Wow! such passionate caaling to come back leaving else..just can be felt the desire and the long wait ya in..Winnie

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Omar Ibrahim 24 August 2009

i liked the last expression......the poem is wonderful i give it 10

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Maria C 01 September 2009

That was very moving :) . I enjoyed it

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Floyd Zimmerman 05 September 2009

The last line is great, you seem so fragile

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2009

upon you The one I love Please don't stop my tears simply brush them away...... there is bliss inignorance and der donot allow tears to roll out from eyes else it may bring shame and dishonour on you..let you true love come andbrush itaway..well done in poetry and i would wish many more creationfs fromyou...congrats.....10 read mine cry not......a place callled home....welcome...you go back...yes yes yes

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Spiritwind Wood 30 September 2009

i would've rated this, but the rate box was gone-10 for me-what a heartbreaker

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Mubeen Sadhika 16 September 2009

Form is very good. Heart felt expressions. Beautifully worded. Deserves 10+++++++

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Keith Hendrickson 07 September 2009

another great piece of writing. like the form of this 1 and the style. your words flow very smoothly.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 September 2009

Please don't stop my tears simply brush them away...................love intense by alienation cry of innocence bewilders at criss-cross, utterly passionate and poignant too, wrought ingeniously by gloomy shadow of alienation, soul crunches deep whispering to the rune of hope of tomorrow, quite heart touching, yet heart awaits meandering.....10+++, thanks for sharing

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