Past Feelings Poem by Shauny Thomson

Past Feelings



Theres one thing that really makes me cry is the fact im guaranteed to die
it always creeps into my head when im lying alone in my bed

but can i leave my mark before it gets dark im feeling cold i, should be dreaming but all i hear is screaming

its the wind its not even there but its presence is heard and it whispers the words
open your eyes look at the starry sky i admired its beauty and its puity

it made me feel driven to have success through livin
i close my eyes im having visions no more superstitions just motivation to keep livin

now i live everyday like its my last and i make sure to never bring up the past

and to repress all of those deppressed feelings i had

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Shaun Thomson 11 October 2010

this is my first poem i have ever written i wrote it during a hard time in my life.

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