Sunday, March 11, 2018

Pebble Three Comments

Rating: 5.0

How sun dies
In rocks
In waters
How fire cages


Muhammad Ali
Susan Williams 11 April 2018

Intriguing poem, my friend. I wonder, I wonder, how long will the sun keep burning

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Mj Lemon 15 March 2018

Wonderful, Ali. Even the eternal has some resting place. I am discovering a sense of peace in your words.

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Unwritten Soul 12 March 2018

Wow dear, this is wonderful....the sunrise and sunset play, then as the birth of soot from fiery air to be into this thought made your poem expensive..i loved it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 March 2018

This amazing thought shared here generates more thoughts in mind. Sun's life journey is witnessed. This poem is really very brilliant...10

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