# # Penance For A Dream Poem by Sonya Florentino
# # Penance For A Dream
Is it worth it….waiting
Knowing I will never find him
To have you kiss my blistered feet
Is it worth the long trip
To have you find me instead of him
To have you rescue me from his whims
To have you save me
From certain death for want of him
Oh muse!
Must you punish me too!
I got an email saying I received the comment below but when I go to my comments page it is not there (Poemhunter glitch?) So, to whoever sent it, thank you but please let me know who you are........Sonya You have a new comment about your poem: # # # LAMENT IN SILENCE ----Silence is the measure of a man it can be gentle or like a sharp sword..nice poem....... it is good to have a friend on lifes uneven path of emotion uavaniceday regards--------
Penance is an interesting theme do we ever really pay for a precieved hurt or are we only soothing our own conscience.-Hummmm! -----10
you saved her...saved your self from a possible sin...what if you blstered your feet? nicely penned...reflective...thanks...10
This is so emotional in it's plea. Hope you will be saved after all..(smile)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Nice reflective piece Sonya...well crafted.10