Sunday, January 4, 2009

Phoenix Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wonder why a trustworthy
Seldom trusted!

Is a trusty so enigmatic to you?

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Vidi Writes
COMMENTS

Ahhh, the proverbial Rise of the Phoenix....This is beautifully wrtitten young lady, with an eloquence of pomp, prowess, and poeticmajesty, as well as it's inveterated philosophic underpinnings...I like it...It sparkles...as you do...and will continue to! F j R 2009

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Rani Turton 15 January 2009

A lot of food for thought, as usual, Vidi. Thanks.

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Deepti Agarwal 14 January 2009

only when the soul comes alive..... lovely one...

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rohit sapra 14 January 2009

This is a very nice poem which talks about characteristics which are unidentified in a person as the qualities which are to be appreciated are seldom appreciated in this worldly world where goodness is turning to be rarest of rare qualities.

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Chitra - 13 January 2009

these words are alimentation for the soul the essence of truth well expressed

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Catrina Heart 12 January 2009

A thought provoking poem written with fine imagery used and nice tone of words...Like any other values, trust is being earned from what you have planted...If you have planted the seed of honesty you'll profit the virtue of trust and respect...Thanks for the wonderful read. A phoenix burns itself and from ashes it comes back to life...10+++

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 January 2009

A most interesting poem. I am not sure I understand it all. But what I did understand was wonderful ! Thoughtful ! GW62

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Raj Nandy 10 January 2009

VIDI, it is a good poem! It gives us food for thought! We must first learn to trust ourselves before we trust others, - and finally God! Thanks for the New Years message sent earlier! - Raj Nandy

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C.R. Clark 10 January 2009

An excellent poem, Vidi. Very often a 'trusty' is not recognized as such from the beginning. Like the phoenix, truth and honesty eventually 'rises from the ashes' to reveal itself. Thanks. A 10. Richard

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Sebastine Humaemo 10 January 2009

pleasant and much true....well penned vidi......lines with full of emotional message.......10+ sebastine

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 January 2009

Beautiful and symbolic use of the myth of Phoenix, the mythological bird. In continuity and resurrection of life there is a rare chance of any change in term of trust and honesty.......A good piece of write Vidi and 10 for you.

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Subbaraman N V 10 January 2009

What a great message to the suffocating society! Great write Congrats!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 January 2009

A phoenix from Hell emerged in Heaven.Nothin is impossible except death! !

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Mamta Agarwal 06 January 2009

truth and honesty, rare qualities suspicion and doubt abound in reality. i really liked the last three lines.well Vidi, how many can look at themselves with honesty, so where does trust and truth stand a chance, great thought of an enquiring mind, perplexed.so good to read yoy after a long haitus10 happy new year mamta

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Vaibhav Pandey 05 January 2009

wow...... I truly loved it. 10

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Kesav Easwaran 04 January 2009

truth is the face of trustworthiness and those who are dark minded face less fearfully shy away from the brightness it spreads...beautiful poem Vidi...a 'phoenix' in the ph poem sky...10

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