Tuesday, September 27, 2011

Please Come Back Home Comments

Rating: 3.5

If you could believe me please
my pain is so pure
Even the thought of hurting you
hurts me several times more.

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Kalpak Kaplash
COMMENTS
Neela Nath Das 13 December 2015

Very romantic and the pain is evident from each and every word., Great!

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V. J. 10 January 2014

A love story describe in word...Last few line is simply awsum...well written and keep it up...

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Shivani Misra 10 March 2012

awww...this was also goood! : -) keep up the good work!

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Miriam Maia Padua 11 October 2011

very nice... really touching... ' How could i hurt the heart whom i loved like such Please come back home I miss you so much.'

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Ency Bearis 28 September 2011

nice poem, great write

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Jessie Hopkins 28 September 2011

What a fantastic poem! I really enjoyed reading it, and though this poem a sad, love poem there was a line that, for me, seemed to less the pain. 'A night without you was like darkness which was dumb.' I really liked reading this poem and I can't wait to read the others.

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Malaya Roses 28 September 2011

Narration of emotion with intensity of deep hope and love. Something sad and some hidden wish was pouring into a beautiful poem. Well done...! ! !

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Indira Babbellapati 28 September 2011

yet another love poem, simple and elegant...

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Crimson Love 27 September 2011

When you know you were of me an inseparable part. Very nice lines, such a beautiful poem!

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Vipins Puthooran 27 September 2011

Excellent poem... Well written

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