Sunday, August 11, 2013

Please, Just Listen To Me. Comments

Rating: 4.5
All the lessons I've learned
and tried to pass on.
The knowledge I've accumulated
to make me strong.


Mark Dillon
Kim Barney 08 January 2016
Good advice. Children often learn too late that their parents were right all along.
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Janet Mary Zylstra 08 January 2016
Lovely. Really touches a chord.
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Alem Hailu G/kristos 08 January 2016
Yes wise children have a lot to learn from parents who give pieces of advice but who are not ruthlessly judgemental.who measure their love to their children by the feathers on their caps.
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M Asim Nehal 08 January 2016
Sharing knowledge is the supreme gift one can offer to fellow.....10
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Edward Kofi Louis 08 January 2016
Bit let the lessons of life be with righteous teachings. Nice work.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 January 2016
Great poem, meaningful and inspirational too. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Roseann Shawiak 08 October 2013
Read this poem again and remembered when my younger son was 25, he called me up and said, Mom, you were right. About what, I said. Well, remember all those talks and lectures you gave me when I was younger? You thought I wasn't listening to you - well, I was, and you were right about everything. Just wanted to let you know that I appreciate what you've done for me. Thank you, Mom. I love you, Mom. Sometimes they do listen to what you say, they just don't let on that they have. Just wanted to share that with you. Thank you, RoseAnn.
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Lyn Paul 08 October 2013
I have listened again. Thank you and goodluck
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Diane Hine 03 October 2013
Even if they don't seem to listen, I'm sure the message sinks in really and helps them make the right decisions. A poem that parents can appreciate.
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Karen Sinclair 30 September 2013
A lovely take heed moment in life. Once it was our turn to roll our eyes and sigh now we create those reactions by merely trying to save the pains. Loved this piece. Rolled easily and sunk in deep. This will be as relevant in 200 years as it is now I think. Karen
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Roseann Shawiak 22 September 2013
Totally identify with you. Family is the greatest! I'm the oldest of eight, sometimes trying to help younger siblings is like talking to the wall, but you keep trying through the years, hoping they'll mature somewhere along the way and actually listen.
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Laurie X3 19 September 2013
You must have children.
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 17 September 2013
Mark. You are always excellent
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Geetima Baruah Sarma 23 August 2013
Nice write. It was a pleasure reading the verse.
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Hazel Durham 21 August 2013
Beautiful write with great rhythm and flow and wonderful wisdom!
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Lyn Paul 12 August 2013
Full of meaning holding us captive. The confidence of the youth today is strong, they want only to put their feet forward not to see where ours have been and burnt. Thank you
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Valerie Dohren 11 August 2013
Excellent Mark - great advice of course, but getting people to take it is another matter. Very well crafted write.
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Payal Parande 11 August 2013
how true if we just listen to the people who care about us and we care about them because those words may seem wrong at the time but they will work as a bridge to get through troubles.... well built piece with well built emotions, brilliant sir
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Lucifera Santez 11 August 2013
So please just listen to the words that I say. beautiful lines. a great piece. please read some of my poems and feel free to comment. :)
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