karen sinclair

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Plucking Daisies..... Sigh Relief...... - Poem by karen sinclair

Adored cherished as one Sistine chapel
In time memorial
Time has become but a painful itch
Which barrs which cuts and scars
I dont want a poxy
Scratched back
Stroked sordid lie
I dont want roses culled in their masses
For Tescos, from Asda
For some shitty supermarket shareholder to rub his palms together stroking green superficial paper.....no
I hope
Yeah dream for a daisy plucked in honesty
With thought, with due care
Just that effort of leaning down and plucking one pretty weed
Just for me
My world for a daisy,
My love for a dandelion
For a kiss that is truthfully felt
Not one poxy crappy kiss of obligation
Strangulated in gold
And certainly not one bunch of dead perfectly piled flora bunda
Suffocating in cellophane


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sigh release

Comments about Plucking Daisies..... Sigh Relief...... by karen sinclair

  • Valsa George (9/28/2012 11:55:00 PM)


    Something given with thought and love is far more appreciated than a gift wrapped in gold. Beautifully put! (Report) Reply

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  • (9/27/2012 5:55:00 AM)


    The last two lines are so true and striking.My world for a daisy-A wonderful thought! A nice rendition.THANKS. (Report) Reply

  • (9/19/2012 4:29:00 PM)


    You long for romance,
    for spontaneity,
    for the genuine
    and yet just one daisy
    does not make this true,
    only continuity and loyalty
    and your dream comes true.
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  • Saadat Tahir (9/13/2012 8:27:00 AM)


    sigh!
    Yeah dream for a daisy plucked in honesty
    With thought, with due care

    what beaut dream....loved yer poem...great content and context

    cheers
    :)
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  • (8/30/2012 9:31:00 AM)


    Where shall we find such convenience in the Concrete jungle? Flower exporting is a multi billion dollar business and many poor countries including India invested a lot and polluting their soil with fertilizers and pesticides to get the dollar and pound income..
    Karen, Your poem is written with good intention. I like it..
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  • Valerie Dohren (8/29/2012 12:49:00 PM)


    Flowers should be left to grow under the sun - you may like to read mine entitled Pray Do Not Pick The Dafodills.
    Great write Karen.
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  • (8/29/2012 9:07:00 AM)


    The gesture of a simple gift choosen without corporations and preconceived marketing ideas and flowers in dozens with rediculous markups as opposed to a single bud purposefully plucked providing a perfect posey present. Totally agree. Great stuff! (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2012 4:23:00 AM)


    Love the line plucked with honesty, it has a certain depth which I can relate to. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 27, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 28, 2012


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