Tuesday, July 2, 2013

Poetry For Children: Flying With My Kite © Comments

Rating: 5.0

A brilliant day to fly my kite,
Where else? But on our beach!
Dad holds it fast, with all his might,
Mum hoists it out of reach!


Roann Mendriq
Bapi ghosh 14 December 2020

Send me the summary of this poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 October 2015

A royal golden eagle sprite, I think I'm rather like that kite, I soar when in free rein; Free as a bird, in joyful flight, Heedless of all constrain. Yes precious string held fast in his hand. such words give power and imagination and at the end a very positive note to desire for guidance. thank you very much dear Poetess. tony

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Gajanan Mishra 02 July 2013

safe home to love and land, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Kharon March 02 July 2013

Good depiction of a childhood memory u captured adolescence wonderfully

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 02 July 2013

Resplendent rhymes and the beauty of the poem makes it wonderful reading. Great work Roann.

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