1
Poets are like spiders—
better poets
better spinners—
webs of words
that stick—
and lines
so durable—
their webs may tremble
in time's winds
but they are fastened well.
2
Though fastened well
and beautiful
they're mostly overlooked.
But there are some
who linger long enough
to catch that certain
slant of light—
and in a lease that may
last centuries
the some who see be many.
Wow. This one is interesting. I agree spider's webs are intricate and beautifully crafted just like many poems but are often ignored. In my poem " Thank you dear poets" I compared poets with honeybees. But your comparison of a poet with a spider is really interesting.
I like this image! Especially after reading your poem that ends, Is there a truest light? Sometimes light has to hit something just right to illuminate its beauty, and some writers come into vogue and go out of vogue depending on what that particular time values. The webs don't lose their beauty. They just get lost in the shadows.
glad you do, suzanne. john donne is an example of a poet who went out of vogue then came back in due to t.s. eliot's enthusiasm for him. i expect you caught the emily reference in the phrase a certain slant of light. appreciate you comments! -glen
I very much relate to this one Glen. I do think a spider web is so underated. It is intricate and beautiful and artfully crafted and innate to the spider, very much like a poet with his poem. So closely tied to the poets heart and written not for others to admire, but because there is a deep calling to do so. Thank you for sharing.
thank you for reading and commenting, loza. part of what brought this poem on (cooking in my subconscious) is that i had read about spider silk. it is amazing stuff, amazingly strong! -glen
Interesting description about poets by a poet who wants to be a spider... ;)
thank you, yiyan. and good to meet you here at poemhunter. i just read one of your poems and intend to read more. spin on! -glen
This strikes me as an invitation to others to write their own poem. The metaphor of the spider for the poet and its web for his collected poems resonates: it's the tradition begun by THE NOISELESS, PATIENT SPIDER by Whitman and I sense Dickinson's presence in THAT CERTAIN SLANT OF LIGHT. So this summons to poetry evokes the two great American poets.
you would pick up the dickinson allusion, daniel, well-read as you are. i didn't think of whitman, but the use of the word lease with respect to time was written with shakespeare sonnets in the background. thank you, daniel, perceptive reader. -glen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very interesting and unusual simile and form. I like the comparison very much and the surprise that you end with is very satisfying.