Pride Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Pride

Rating: 4.8


Her pride
Made her perch
Among the stars.

Her pride
Made her exile
And live homeless.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Wednesday, September 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2020

A well conveyed poetic expression.. Simply splendid.....10+++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 September 2020

That is true. Such a nice poem.

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Anjandev Roy 18 September 2020

Brilliant piece about pride......thanks for sharing.......anjandev roy.

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Valsa George 19 September 2020

Pride goes before a fall! From the pinnacle of glory while she shone like a star, she was pulled down to the deep depths of poverty! A proud person alienates himself/ herself from the peers and leads a secluded life. This self conceit leads to a down fall for the very same reason. A bitter truth is given beautiful poetic expression!

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Kostas Lagos 19 September 2020

Pride...such a strange demon... great poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 October 2022

A brilliant poem that conveys a precious message.

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Nabakishore Dash 03 June 2022

Once one perches with stars, he/she is sure to fall. Nice write.

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One who with a self assigned position among the stars will definitely lose her original status and will have to remain homeless

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 September 2020

Pride has power to make rich and poor to bring peace and tears...................

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Akhtar Jawad 27 September 2020

We all are birds and we all have perch. We all live homeless. A nice short poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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