Sunday, April 5, 2009

Rain Comments

Rating: 4.6

Atomized ocean, sun powered, airlifted,
With thunder and lightning, breaks
Eternal silence of infinite space.
Unknown what is it holding when it falls, yet

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Tom Allport 16 April 2020

The life blood of mother Earth

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Timbuktoo 29 December 2019

Monsoons....... I love it, your just getting better with ever line and verse.

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Srijani Mahanta 27 July 2019

Immensely beautiful lines on rain.A glamorous version of rain.A big 10+++++++.Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant poetry with all of us.

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Anjandev Roy 25 June 2019

Eternal silence of infinite space.......wonderful expression.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 February 2019

Rains are the best gift to our earth by the loving sky.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2018

The beginning of the poem is too captivating with impressive touch. How rain appears is astutely inscribed through nice penmanship as.....Atomized ocean, sun powered, airlifted, With thunder and lightning, breaks Eternal silence of infinite space. A beautiful poem amazingly shared.10

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 August 2018

excellently penned- world wide waterfalls of existence Emptying itself on what the world survives- Failed or excess, all is derailed.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 16 June 2018

with thunder and lightning, breaks eternal silence of infinite space...... beautiful. Ask you freely, is really there silence eternal without chaotic noise of speedy movement of celestial bodies in the space infinite! Sure you are about its soundlessness or you can't imagine its violent chaos beyond your conceiving capability as a human entity!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 June 2018

I have read many poems on rain but this is a different kind of poem with different taste! The beauty of poetic expression is captivating! This poem is a wonderful ode to Rain! ....Or world wide waterfalls of existence/Emptying itself on what the world survives-Failed or excess, all is derailed……! Magnificent piece of poetry! (10)

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Kostas Lagos 23 May 2018

A poem masterfully written! Fantastic!

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Alina Abbas 06 August 2017

Diverse yet composed! Nice words.

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Upendra Upm 25 July 2017

first three lines are brilliant description of rain.

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Angus Macdonald 24 July 2017

Yes, Peace is of interest to me. Thank you for the reference!

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Queeny Gona 18 May 2017

Celestial shower of mercy Man's earth turned desire It is crafted so well that readers could capture the image you tried to portray herein. Enjoyed reading it!

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Queeny Gona 18 May 2017

Celestial shower of mercy Man's earth turned desire.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 28 November 2015

A nice write.Enjoyed reading it.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 30 November 2014

Good imaginations makes it a nice poem and likes it.

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Soulful Heart 10 August 2012

wonderful shower of words that brings a new lease to life........................simply put yet so sweeeeeeeeeet. wish I could get such aweetness in time.......... :)

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 November 2010

just so simply amazing...

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Marieta Maglas 09 August 2010

Beautiful poem, I am highly happy to go through yours high thoughts

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