Ali Sabry

Gold Star - 7,339 Points (11/08/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

Rain Please Do Not Stop. - Poem by Ali Sabry

RAIN please do not stop

Rain please do not stop, shower us from sins
shower us with BARAKAT and bring us peace

Rain, you were bringing a smile to our prophet
I will keep stand under you with all of sophisticate

You are the only one can change the beauty of nature
I will always keep mention you from each corner

You were being faithful to me
You were the one did cry for me

I understand you spent you tears all around the world
its for sake of human lives and for sake of food

The true love come from you
I promise i will always be faithful and remembering you

Hope YOU like it (Rain)

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RAIN please do not stop

Comments about Rain Please Do Not Stop. by Ali Sabry

  • (7/14/2013 7:36:00 PM)

    See this poem is written from the heart, and simply amazing. You use like rhyme and repeat the word at the last stanza as of pointing at the person you are writing about, good job astounding absolutely astounding. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/11/2013 6:31:00 PM)

    Rain has a way about it. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (7/7/2013 5:33:00 PM)

    rain washes away all sin. a lovely write (Report) Reply

  • (7/5/2013 12:08:00 PM)

    A very touching poem. (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    i will keep standing*
    remember* you in last line.
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  • (6/25/2013 2:47:00 AM)

    Shower us with Barakat and bring us peace.nice piece. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, June 24, 2013

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