Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 12,840 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Rainbow In Motion Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Red, orange, yellow

green, blue, indigo- violet
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Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow

Comments about Rainbow In Motion Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Vernon Eaker (10/16/2017 4:11:00 AM)

    I adore your, skills of writing, I will read more. This morning is not the time, I will track your use of rhyme, Trust me you shall know, when I write a comment below. (Report) Reply

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  • Rebecca Navarre (3/26/2017 11:18:00 PM)

    Wow! ! ! ! ! What An Enchanting, Beautifully, Colored Painting! ! ! ! ! With Such A Wondrous Flow! ! ! ! !
    Truly Amazing! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Elena Sandu (8/31/2016 7:09:00 AM)

    Wow, what a great read! Brilliant imagery, rich penning, thank you for share. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/24/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    Each and every word has given color to your imagination.The seven colors Rainbow shows give birth to new hope.Lovely write! (Report) Reply

  • (6/28/2014 5:56:00 PM)

    ...............loved reading every stanza.....and next time I see a rainbow I will definitely make a wish... (Report) Reply

  • Rachel Branscombe (1/15/2013 8:33:00 PM)

    It's beautiful. I can imagine the rainbow with all it's colours (Report) Reply

  • (1/15/2013 8:15:00 PM)

    I love how all of the little sections are haikus... And as hard as it is to write a beautiful haiku, you've wrote so many on the same topic. (Report) Reply

  • (9/15/2009 3:32:00 AM)

    this is so beautifully written..I could see each colour of the rainbow...embracing my heart...whispers of the endless sky...reassuring....I am here....I exist....if only you can reach out...patiently awaiting.... (Report) Reply

  • (9/7/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    this one is really good
    i like it

    please do the same to mine =]


    -diana teo
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  • (8/19/2009 11:18:00 AM)

    this poem is beautiful the first verse i was hooked great job lorraine (Report) Reply

  • Alice Vedral Rivera (6/18/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    So many different ways to view rainbows - rainbows are truly inspirational and the rainbows in Washington State are magnificent.

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  • (6/8/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    It is not a rainbow in motion. This is a flowered, colorful comet in motion within the magic kaleidoscope of universe.10. (Report) Reply

  • (6/6/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    i like it very much (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2009 10:01:00 AM)

    Rainbow.................the lovliest natural scene. its really inspiring
    thnx for sharing
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  • (4/11/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    Absolutely great! So much in so small! Greatest creation of Nature beautifully presented! Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2009 10:50:00 PM)

    Lovely imagery of an admirable description of the rainbow. Elegant depiction of many different ways of viewing it. (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2009 10:48:00 AM)

    This is as delicate as the celestial dance in the skies and as piercing as a sun breaking through the heavens. I enjoy the anthropomorphic elements and the progression in this sprawling work, Lorraine: the rainbow of delight within all of us. Universally appealing while effortlessly ponderous. The theme of the hidden colors within all visible light works well within the haiku form. You've managed to present an articulate and engaging poem! Thanks for sharing! Excellent work; sorry about the delay on my reciprocation to your open kindness. Warm regards, John. (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2009 9:33:00 AM)

    A few words of praise are not complimentary enough for this excellent poem of so many thoughtful and creative Haiku verses. Truly outstanding.10+++++. Jim (Report) Reply

  • (3/28/2009 10:55:00 PM)

    I liked this. Very vivid rainbow imagery. A ten. (Report) Reply

  • (3/23/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    Very nicely written. I especially enjoyed the last line. Thank you for suggesting that I read it.

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