Raindrops Poem by Javier Falcon

Raindrops



I stand by this palm reminiscing,
as the rain drenches my body,
and my mind floods with memories.

I look up and the rain drops freefall,
they drip off my cheek as I smile,
each one so beautiful and so similar.

Having their own differences within,
holding hidden beauty waiting to be let loose,
as all the girls I have met through my life.

Even so, one calls my attention,
the one which follows its own path,
reminding me ever so much of you.

The one and only which hits me on the lips,
giving me that sweet taste none other can,
giving me the true happiness in life.

As they hit the ground and sing,
as this tone which soothes my soul,
releasing my mind in a torrent of joy.

As I see you walk out of the store,
heading toward me with gorgeous eyes,
smiling, lighting up everything I feel for you.

We stand together under this curtain of water,
so separate from the outside world,
as I hold your hands, and am wanting a kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
May Namoc 18 July 2008

i'm having a commenthalon (i'm just gonna bombard you with comments) so yeah.. ok, i love this one. its so cute and adorable and i love the story that u tell. you are so good! it really is like a movie playin gin my head. awesome work javi.

0 0 Reply

very good emotions, i like the feelings that are in here. i have a picture in my head of whats going on here. good write Javier... :)

0 0 Reply
Rehab Helmy 16 July 2008

very nice feelings Rehab

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
Close
Error Success