Raining Panic Poem by Lyn Paul

Raining Panic

Rating: 4.8


Awake
Deep breathe
For Fear
Germs
Falling
From the sky
Stay
Calm
For work is required
In all fields
To Keep
This World
Alive
Survival
Required
A Virus
Yes
Death
Only
For the weakest
So wake
Join forces
Help each other


Copyright Reserved March 2020


Lyn Paul

Thursday, March 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: calm,panic,survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2020

I concur with your wonderful and pragmatic way to address the serious problem we are experiencing right now. Yes, it is only through joint efforts and helping one another that enable us to conquer this menace. A powerful and inspiring write. Liked the closure lines.

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Kevin Patrick 16 November 2020

This year has been a test, so many have suffered and died, while others remain ignorant, but you are right on the money if we work together instead of against it we could survive, and maybe help those in need.

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Tom Allport 18 July 2020

A sad truth it has now become survival of the fittest....well penned

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Khairul Ahsan 21 April 2020

At this trying moment, if we panic, we ae gone, individually and collectively! 'Join forces Help each other' - that's it, thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 27 March 2020

Big voices, big gun, massive power cant unite people Irony, Lil army visits, to warn, no one can live without others Love unites in this hardship Silver lining Before the virus go

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2020

Yes, we have to keep this world alive by joining forces and helping each other. A brilliant expression on Virus and awreness has been made by you dear madam, it is really a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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