Wednesday, December 28, 2016

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Rating: 4.0

I was an alien in his world;
a no-beauty to behold,
random story untold-
made both of our worlds so cold.

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Elora Costan
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Anil Kumar Panda 02 January 2017

The pain one suffers due to unrequited love. very nice.

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Rajnish Manga 30 December 2016

Deeply felt agony expressed honestly. A terrible experience where love does not beget love for superfluous reasons. It shows the hypocrisy of a man. Very poignant poem. Thanks for sharing. a no-beauty to behold, Half a heart taking a journey, with the adversities she didn't foresee;

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Elora Leanor 30 December 2016

I write to express :) Thanks!

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