Thursday, May 24, 2012

Raven Comments

Rating: 3.3
If you see a dark place
Know that a raven passed by
If you see a weeping eye
Know that a raven passed by

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Fadwa Daddou Gmiden
COMMENTS
Alafe Ramat 24 June 2012
Beautifuly expresd and wel brushed, a sad poignant write, wel done: -)
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Kellsey Hartmann 25 May 2012
this is very dark, though very descriptive. it's sad, but it paints a picture and there is a glimmer of hope at the end.
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Saadat Tahir 24 May 2012
a nice foot stepping into poe's shoes it is scary for sure...nice effect be happy sat
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Jr Cuyam 24 May 2012
Wow! i like the way you express pains and hurts and everything that's inside of us... through the doors of time You shall escape Through the light of hope You shall escape. we can escape from everything that blinds and weaken us..thanks to Jesus Christ
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