These words that I write, are not real
if I can't make you feel
what I want to say
as now you're away;
but, I want to show you the love
that lies beyond these words that I write
'cause it is true,
as when the sun sets, and comes the night,
the home I live in, doesn't feel home, without you.
poetic real words are inspiring always; nice to read your poetic thought
Loveliest poem made my DAY! Surprising beautiful end! When I read the final line, I realize that the poet has proved Real Words, not fake.5 Stars FULL for you and the poem! I have enjoyed ardently
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Rajmoi, you have so very well expressed the inexpressible feeling of love. Not an easy task! Excellent poem.