Aqua Flower


Redemption In Rain - Poem by Aqua Flower

let it pour
let the rain come down
let it rain more
for evil lives all around
let the rain come down
wash away every sin
redemption in rain
pray for salvation, sing every hymn
for if God is a God
he will let it rain
to wash away the evil
and cleanse all souls from pain

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Topic(s) of this poem: rain, redemption


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Here in the east coast, nothing but rain....perhaps God is redeeming us.

Comments about Redemption In Rain by Aqua Flower

  • Khairul Ahsan (6/1/2018 11:29:00 PM)


    Rain is a great cleanser. It cleanses and washes away dirt from the pavements, courtyards, open fields and river banks. I live and grew up in a country that receives a lot of Monsoon rain.
    Welcome to PH in your new guise. Perhaps rain has helped blossom the 'Rainbow Flower'?
    Please continue writing. Poetry flows naturally in you.
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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (5/17/2018 1:37:00 AM)


    Such a pleasant poem👍👍👍 (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (5/17/2018 4:39:00 AM)

    Thank you, Bernard!

  • Bill Cantrell (5/16/2018 8:50:00 PM)


    I love this! ! A little different style, raining here too, a whole bunch! ! God will remove evil soon, very soon, a great poem flower! (Report) Reply

    Aqua Flower (5/16/2018 9:32:00 PM)

    Hello my friend....haha! yes a different style! Glad you liked it! :)

  • Robert Murray Smith (5/16/2018 8:42:00 PM)


    Rainbow Flower, let the rain come down, forever, washing away pain.+++10

    Robert
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    Aqua Flower (5/16/2018 9:29:00 PM)

    Yes let it forever wash our pain away bringing sunshine galore!

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 16, 2018



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