Mark R Slaughter

Release - Poem by Mark R Slaughter

When you think about our lives -
Screaming kids and nagging wives:
'Can't smoke here - no! not there -
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  • Echezonachukwu Nduka (6/9/2012 2:35:00 AM)

    You're doing a wonderful work Mark.I love the poem and the rhymes too! .I invite you to check my page and read some of my poems here.Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/9/2012 9:38:00 PM)

    nice poem & just keep your head up my friend (Report) Reply

  • (1/16/2012 7:51:00 AM)

    It's a nice poem about life, but i don't it's life that's bothering you, it's more like the person you're living with xD p.s. life can be quite good you just need to let it GET you: P (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2010 3:32:00 AM)

    NICE Poem Mark! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2009 5:55:00 AM)

    Life has different life (Report) Reply

  • (10/4/2009 6:56:00 AM)

    It's just amazing how you expressed about 'life' in a poetic way; your words flow smoothly and they carry a HUGE load so the title perfectly fits. Well done (Report) Reply

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