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Rating: 5.0
On a cool night
a full moon
inspects toddler's toys
strewn across the yard


M.J. Lemon
Susan Williams 08 March 2020
On a cool night / a full moon / inspects toddler's toys / strewn across the yard- - - -> this so gorgeous! ! ! ! so visual! ! ! ! it is what well-written Literature is all about! ! ! ! The rest of the lines follow this visual treasure of a poem 10+++++++++++++++ and onto my fav
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Mj Lemon 09 March 2020
Susan, many thanks. Much appreciated!
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Valsa George 29 February 2020
Even small scenes and natural occurrences of no great significance can leave a lot of impressions when the mind is calm and composed. The same scenes might not impress us or even seem repulsive if the mind is perturbed. So everything depends on our mental mood. Beautiful poem....! 10 on 10
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Mj Lemon 29 February 2020
Thank you so very much, Valsa. Yes, I am always amazed by how great an impact small things can have, and how long lasting those memories are.
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Unwritten Soul 28 November 2019
And thats how memories remind us, just like a smoke of past revisit air..thick, thin and may gone but cold or warm lingers!
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Mj Lemon 29 November 2019
Indeed, Soul! Thank you so much.
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Muhammad Ali 27 November 2019
Hi M.J. Lemon. Blessings are the moments a man remembers and breathing in peaceful memories. nice poem dear friend.
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Mj Lemon 27 November 2019
Thank you, my friend. And indeed those peaceful memories are the foundation of blessing.
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Richard Wlodarski 19 November 2019
Reminds me of the peace I always experience when I'm up in Northern Ontario. M.J., thanks for this peaceful memorable work of art.
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Mj Lemon 19 November 2019
Thank you, Richard. So good to hear I am able to transport you back to stunning Northern Ontario.
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Leeann Azzopardi 13 November 2019
the imagery takes me to a place that every soldier or someone fighting for justice and peace is searching for
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Mj Lemon 13 November 2019
Thank you so very much, LeeAnn. That was a key part of my vision.
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