Friday, January 2, 2009

**responsible (Inspirational) Comments

Rating: 2.9

Where do I get this treasured bliss?
I take the passion of life and I take the risks.
Life isn't for that fool to be me.
I can understand my happiness in a simple kiss.

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Sarah Sisson
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Reshma Ramesh 07 February 2009

truly inspiring............ with loads of wisdom...........well penned

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 January 2009

Truly I hold a key to the world I live in. My mind is a blessing and I chose to give in..............oh, superb way of thinking while trudging all through the path life by the wisdom, well depicted piece by the rhythmof life, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Eddie Roa 15 January 2009

This is a good statement of a personal creed. Write on.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 January 2009

Be responsible, you'll find a better inspirational in later life.The fulfilment is the medal to win.

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Akram Awadat 15 January 2009

nice poem greate one thanks

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Ridge Cahill 12 January 2009

A simple premise so eloquently conveyed...an inspiration indeed.

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Keith Hendrickson 12 January 2009

i like this a lot. the style and flow all of it. great piece

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 January 2009

Responsibility is a great job Sarah and this poem is an undertaking of this difficult job in a sense.....A good piece of write. Best Regards Naseer

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Ron Flowers 04 January 2009

I like it, Sarah. I like the attitude it portrays, I like the way you wrote it. Warm regards Ron

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Ency Bearis 02 January 2009

wonderful...a nice upliftment verses..10

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Mittur Ramprasad 02 January 2009

Understanding of basic essentials of life is all it takes tofind everyday happiness while trekking along the life's highway, wonder why we humans make living so complicated, .......................

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