Kelly Kurt

Gold Star - 194,042 Points (1/14/1958 / Cedar Rapids Iowa)

Revenge (Limerick) - Poem by Kelly Kurt

Jean Paul ate nothing but rich desserts
Every day even knowing it hurts
Cheesecake, tortes and cream pies
Til they bulged out his eyes
And exited much lower in squirts

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Limerick

Comments about Revenge (Limerick) by Kelly Kurt

  • Wes Vogler (11/14/2015 11:24:00 PM)

    Smoothed out, somewhat (at your discretion) Keep at it, please kelly I am enjoying the company in this somewhat lost field Jean Paul, he just ate rich desserts
    Ev 'ry day even knowing it hurts
    Cheesecake, tortes, cream pies,
    'Til they bulged out his eyes
    While exiting, much lower, in squirts.
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    Kelly Kurt (11/15/2015 8:02:00 PM)

    You have a knack for finding ways to make flow much more smooth. I will try harder. Thanks, Wes.

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/31/2015 7:56:00 PM)

    Verily, an amusing one, Loved reading it...... (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 1:02:00 AM)

    Thanks, Abdulrazak. Limericks are great to have fun with

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/31/2015 10:00:00 AM)

    Poor Jean Paul. Somebody should feed him a dessert made of bitter melon: -) (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (10/31/2015 2:17:00 PM)

    : -) Thanks, Sanjukta

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/31/2015 9:42:00 AM)

    Amusing one. Beautiful limerick. Thanks for sharing....10 (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/31/2015 5:29:00 AM)

    Only desserts will not help him..........Nice satire in limerick. Enjoyable.Sir. (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 1:05:00 AM)

    Especial since he washes them down with tequila. : -)

  • (10/31/2015 2:45:00 AM)

    Yurk! Yurk! luckily there is no chilli in deserts
    Thanks Kelly-10
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    Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 1:03:00 AM)

    Or other gas creating foods.: -)

  • Brian Mayo (10/31/2015 1:16:00 AM)

    You're saying Jean-Paul had the trots
    and his toilet was covered in spots?
    Just take this advice:
    Put his ass in a vise
    Or else tie his colon in knots.
    (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 1:05:00 AM)

    Better advice has seldom been proffered.: -)

  • Ayman Parray (10/31/2015 12:50:00 AM)

    Is Jean Paul real or imaginary? (Report) Reply

    Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 1:01:00 AM)

    Imaginary. (The name and facts have been changed to protect the innocent) : -)

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 31, 2015

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