JOSE MURGUIA

aztlan CITY OF ANGELZ! (EL MONTE)
JOSE MURGUIA
aztlan CITY OF ANGELZ! (EL MONTE)
Friday, January 2, 2009

Roaches. Comments

Rating: 4.9
i spray them, i step on them but there still here,
how can this be
how must i kill these roaches i fear,
roaches never dye,

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JOSE MURGUIA
COMMENTS
Leeona (XOXOs) Sugakixs 20 September 2009
okay wait a minute now. i started rolling because thats how they make you feel like you kill one more come, as if killng one just made them multiply LOL and LTM i stay in San Bernardino we have hudge Water bugs s freaking gross, they fly dude. you have to hit them a FEW times they are ruthless lol 10++
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Pacific Hernandez 20 March 2009
A very nice poem about this sturdy creatures. They rubbed elbows with the dinosaaurs. The dinosours perished but the roaches are still here. I like poems about animals.Ten for this.
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i have pet roaches they are cool so don't step on them they have a right to life too good write like thye rhyming (can't spell)
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Damion Willis 20 February 2009
i understand i grew up around them so i understand i couldn't said it any better read one of mine and comment on it
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Nancy Chambers 20 February 2009
Funny poem, but are the roaches real or are they symbolic?
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Sumpter Carter 18 February 2009
Hmm. Well this one I wonder if it was symbolism. Are these real roaches or something else?
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Blue Sky 19 January 2009
I used to kill roaches everytime I see them but I don't anymore because they don't die. I like how you can make every word fit in well with each other.
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Autumn Stoddard 15 January 2009
Well done. Might I add though that 'dye' should be die.
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John Fieldson 14 January 2009
so true! and nicely written just make sure your roaches dont get into your vitamin pills or they'l carry you away!
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Genesis Learny 11 January 2009
riddex is your best friend! lol
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Mamor Adi P 09 January 2009
Simple theme, yet you write an artful poem from it. You're good, dude.
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Joseph Poewhit 02 January 2009
Know them well - try BORIC ACID - it will help some. AND, don't leave coffee in a cup out. They swim in it.
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Desiree Burdick 02 January 2009
lol totally true poem :)
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