Monday, January 13, 2003

Roman Fountain Comments

Rating: 3.4

Up from the bronze, I saw
Water without a flaw
Rush to its rest in air,
Reach to its rest, and fall.

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Louise Bogan
COMMENTS
Mustafa Test 11 June 2021

Beautiful poem about the water fountain which the imaginations feels gra

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Terry Craddock 10 October 2014

Serendipity Blessings From Roman Fountains Gushing Romans long past left heritage fountains carved from worked stone cast in bronze Romans eyes longed for delight from waters mastered worked to achieve graze of swans cast bronze fountain was mating of copper tin perpetual endless never interrupted water within childlike delights minds wet pleasure gushed in water without flaw refreshes leaves our soul clean water flows leaps dances delight defies cell gravity water rushes into air falls to fill fountain bowl cavity water shapes springs into air in youthful spontaneity water reflects impulsive impulses flexible personality water encapsulates an identity date with enticing eternity water refreshes embodies good fortune curious serendipity Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Roman Fountain' by Louise Bogan.

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Terry Craddock 09 October 2014

Water Flows From Fountains Gushes water flows through pipes hidden from fountains gushes with released life pressures forced up through air gravity defying until point of still stall gravity hung for momentary fleeting split frozen moments before arching back ground fall fascinating is interaction between the cast fountain flowing gasps of gushing water in penetrated air stilled in summer warm air tickling in winter cold chill air soaking Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Roman Fountain' by Louise Bogan.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 September 2014

Beautiful poem about the water fountain which the imaginations feels great,

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Terry Craddock 09 September 2014

Fascinating interaction between the cast fountain and flowing gasps of gushing water air stilled.

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