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Saturday, November 15, 2008

**** Roses For Rosanne Comments

Rating: 4.6
Dust in the winds
Shadows walking leaving trails
Eyes cocking navigate scents meddle the streets
Nightingale scans the sounds of thousands voices

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
COMMENTS
Sherif Monem 25 May 2009
Very, very nice poem rich in meanings.
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Carol Rhodes 08 February 2009
Whew! Have to catch my breath...Sulaiman, such love, such imagery, such a magnificently powerful descriptive journey of experiences shared, places that came alive as you bonded and let your love become true and real. Roseanne, the princess of your life, the flower of choice, is the Queen of Hearts. You are the Man of Hearts, my dear, and we all want everything beautiful to be yours. Carol
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Madison Yeater 26 December 2008
you still love roseanne..go for here! run! you dont need me.... i still love you, but you need to go where your heart follows. i can feel ur love for her in this nicely written poem...
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Sebastine Humaemo 12 December 2008
finely penned dude.....can feel the love n care in your words..................
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CRACK HEAD 29 November 2008
That was very beautiful. I will be reading a lot more of your poems. Could you read some of mine.
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I Amadi 27 November 2008
really enjoy singing these words. feel like breathe is skipping. admire your sensitive command of language. even more so, admire your confidence to share it with us all. very nice slaiman :)
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John Weber 25 November 2008
This flows extremely well, Sulaiman, while engaging the reader with playful and contemplative snapshots of life and your journey. Well done, good sir! There's something here that pretty much anybody out there can relate to. Warm regards, John.
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Ema Nekaf 23 November 2008
Your big on romantics are not you?
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Li Away 22 November 2008
i like this piece you keep Rossanne a diary it's gracious
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Maxim Muyu 22 November 2008
This is real Beauty of poetry and very mature indeed, more real than I can imagine.
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Sally Minns 21 November 2008
its so beautifful i love the style its writen in
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Raven Bishop 20 November 2008
A lot better than a lot of the poems that people write about. Poems like these talk from heart. Please read Swimming, Blind Love, Xmas and many of mine. Feel free to comment.
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 November 2008
The extracts from Susan Bagley's comments: From: Susan Bagley (Winston Salem, North Carolina United States; Female; 59) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 11/20/2008 5: 50: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: roses for roseann I love your newest poem, it flows and reaches nooks and crannies of the soul and heart and speaks the universal language of poetry. Best regards, Susan Bagley
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Eddie Larkin 20 November 2008
Beautifully written... I am in awe!
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Uriah Hamilton 20 November 2008
I enjoyed the melody of this poem.
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Excellent use of simile that makes each of the roses given to Rosanne more golden than gold.It is an awesome write.100/10 Thanks for sharing.
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Ambre Gillstrap 20 November 2008
I enjoyed the way that you worded the poem and the fact that you were listening to music is difficult to do (without writing some words/lines from the song. It seemed to me that you were talking about a happening in your life that you had with someone. I like the fact of how it is personal in one way and then you can look at it again and it can be a different perspective.
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Wali Jamali 20 November 2008
Suleman - The magnificent...... YOU HAVE YOUR EMPIRE OF THOUGHTS. YOUR EMPIRE OF FEEL. YOUR EMPIRE OF OBSEVATION. YOU MUST NOT ACCUMULATE THE FANCIFUL IDEAS HERE AND THERE. YOU HAVE A REAL EMPIRE OF TRAGEDIES AROUND YOU. POEM IS AS SWEET AS RED BERRIES OF 'KARRYA CHOTI' AREA OF ALI HYDER JAMALI. NOSTALGIC IN IMPACT.
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Jerine James 20 November 2008
hey.. nice way of writing.... this n its touching.... i liked it...
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Kite Remedy 20 November 2008
Sometimes, love is so pure and true that we don't need any word to beautify it. It is beautiful by itself indeed.. I think you truly are able to configure love in a way other people aren't. Magnificent..
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