Tuesday, December 31, 2019

Rusty Year Retiring Comments

Rating: 3.8
weary waves whooshing
hoisted horizons hankering
dark dances drooling
felon fate fostering


Joshua Adeyemi
Mahtab Bangalee 01 February 2020
Beautiful New Year Poem Penned// /// Last Years All last years now in rusted retiring now in torn covering now in tattered, shattered, scattered swoon for nothing else Beautiful Sun for beautiful dawn Sun shining for New Year day coming for New Year Resolution////////
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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 February 2020
A well composed fascinating poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece.....10++++
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Matt Starking 01 February 2020
Wow adeyemi you are good with using words to make a sound and meaning, keep writing
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Rini Shibu 01 February 2020
Interesting poem..congratulations
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Anil Kumar Panda 01 February 2020
With its clever wordplay and rhyming it makes very interesting reading. Enjoyed reading. Congrats.
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Edward Kofi Louis 01 February 2020
Tearing! ! ! Mystic melody! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Harley White 01 February 2020
Interesting use of alliteration...
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 February 2020
mystic melody moaning fiery figs feigning voluptuous veils vying.. very fine poem dear poet. tony
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Kingsley Egbukole 01 January 2020
Saying bye to 2019 and welcoming 2020. Beautiful...10.
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