Autumn started and so one reads this poem before 'Spring'. Truthfulness of inspiration in these melodious lines. I recall some of the French symbolists, and an Italian poem by Giosuè Carducci, 'In Front of St. Guy's Church'.
This is a very expressive poem, Koyel, and one that is written quite well also. Though a fairly brief poem, it's imagery is both sharp and very well communicated to the reader. It is much like a fine painting, showing the viewer perhaps a facet of life that they had not previously thought about. In that respect, you have touched upon what writing poetry is all about. Carl.
This is very interesting piece. you could have expanded the idea a little more so that it becomes more lucid in expression and clear for perception. As Saurav said your earlier poems are even better....9