poet Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

** Sanctuary **

Density of the room
Filled with gloom
Ahead, nothing emerges
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  • Jasmine Dugas (7/13/2009 3:19:00 AM)

    another amazing poem.....its really good and i really liked it

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  • Kristina B; Williams (7/11/2009 3:54:00 PM)

    every1 needs theyre personal space and some where to hide and go...pretty darn good..for espressing it so well..10,4 #5

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  • Jester's PJester's P (7/4/2009 7:37:00 PM)

    Greetings of peace!

    In my poem “A game- A fall” I portrayed the situation of a friend in front of temptation- and what was the latter....
    In my work “Manhood” I relate the reality of being a “man” or let me say the 'part of man's growing”.
    And in your poem “Sanctuary” some of the words (elements of imagery) presents the truth of many things that would occur to “mans” life...the sanctuary of health, sickness in a deep sense of the word. And of course all sort of things we are frown to fall or to rise.
    Dear poet, your poem is one of the best...keep the legacy of poetry.

    Note: take yout time to read my poems I mentioned above. Thank you

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (6/21/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    From: Barbara Sallee (perryville arknasas United States; Female; 43)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 6/20/2009 2: 47: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: RE: santurary


    Sulaiman,
    I just read your poem santuary and what a beautiful write. you are an amazing author and have a true gift! ! !
    Barbie

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  • Subroto Chatterjee (6/13/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    Sanctuary as in the concentration camps (Second WW?) . Methinks not. That's the grandaddy of nightmares. Devil's sanctuary more likely...
    Cheers.
    Subroto

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  • Surya . (6/13/2009 12:17:00 AM)

    a wonderfull poem that frightens me to the core.voted10
    surya

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (6/12/2009 8:20:00 PM)

    i remembered that i read this beautiful wonderful poem which mean that it deserve what iy did acieve..as te beautiful things can't be forgotten...10+++++

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  • claire finch (6/12/2009 8:05:00 PM)

    a wonderfull poem that i really ike

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  • Gargi Saha (5/24/2009 10:48:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem. Love & hugs..............

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (5/13/2009 4:25:00 AM)

    a wonderful and profound poem ...

    The exit door is history
    Leads to our mortuaries

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  • Amber Lyn Charneski (5/4/2009 2:35:00 PM)

    Great job! It told so many stories with so few words. I love how it is descriptive enough that to tell the story and it's lack of detail really sets the imagination free. You created this poem flawlessly. I can hardly believe that sure a short poem could inspire me this much. Thank you so much for asking me to read your poem. I love it.

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  • Paolo Giuseppe MazzarelloPaolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (4/30/2009 2:34:00 PM)

    This poem is worthy of a biblical page, the Balthazar's feast.

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  • Richard Vandervoort (4/26/2009 4:19:00 AM)

    Baffling! I taught modern & contemporary poetry 61-74, was poet-in-residence at two universities, and published about a 100 poems during that period. I valued the Confessional School of poetry especially, and poems whose MEANING was clear, poems about something, something one could relate to. I don't value vagueness in poetry. Also, 'blood sweat & tears' is a tad trite, is it not? But, we don't all like the same kind of poetry.

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  • John Smith (4/16/2009 6:50:00 PM)

    It feels as if I sleep in that room every night.

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  • Xera Mclaughlin (4/2/2009 10:57:00 PM)

    I like it alot, I'm kinda new at poem writing so idk how to use all the big words some of the other ppl use, but i did like your poem.....I hope you liked mine

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  • Inday PrisingInday Prising (3/24/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    really good poem..it transcends the union of the male and female from physical to something more metaphysical..really good,

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  • Pensive Phoenix (3/17/2009 8:54:00 PM)

    Good poem, very interesting.

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  • Luwi HabteLuwi Habte (3/16/2009 10:16:00 AM)

    nice poem. sanctuary

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  • Jacob Gifford (3/11/2009 6:08:00 PM)

    Now that is a good poem keep making them

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  • Dr Kamran Haider (3/10/2009 12:51:00 AM)

    This is surely a masterpiece Sir... Very well said... So much said in very few words... I loved the line...

    'The exit door is history'

    Well Done Brother...

    God bless you

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