Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Sand And Water Comments

Rating: 4.6

Returning to shore,
An ocean and its secrets;
To ebb the curiosity of quotidian being,
Whose essence thirst for far off adventures;


Gillena Cox
Chinedu Dike 02 December 2019

A poignant rendition written in heightened poetic diction with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Gillena.

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Gajanan Mishra 05 July 2014

I like the poem with its secrets in ocean, thanks.

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oceans, shores are beautiful subjects for poetry and here the poet wrtten a good poem.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 05 July 2014

I like this poem and I learnt a new word today (quotidian) . I feel it would have been more touching had the words been fitted into a rhythmic pattern.

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Otteri Selvakumar 05 July 2013

nice writing goodness words Gillena Cox mam

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Leslie Philibert 05 July 2013

Not bad, maybe a little too literary, heavy with vocabulary...

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Anita Sehgal 06 July 2012

well sketched... great words

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Bernard Snyder 05 July 2012

Thank you Gillena for sharing such a lovely poem. I will definitely continue to read more of your 'pieces!

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Karen Sinclair 05 July 2012

Just beautifully put... bravo and congratulations on read of the day...karen

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Eyan Desir 10 January 2010

Very nice wording a job well done

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Bursting with beauty. Thanks for sharing.

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rago rago 20 September 2009

very nice write ...............

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Obinna Eruchie 07 September 2009

It is a beautiful poem of description, Gillena.

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Allemagne Roßmann 05 September 2009

Each beakful, each morsel, A hunter’s bounty received to honour a life, a wonderful write dear......10++ definitely although sand and water are enemies of each other.

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Marieta Maglas 03 September 2009

nice abstract, descriptive poem, lovely to read...........10+++++

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Catrina Heart 01 September 2009

Great flow of words with great crafting of imagery and figurative language...........10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 August 2009

Sand and water, the tale of life within life, a great creation.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 August 2009

Watching ocean from shoreline is like watching erosion of time from its eternal flow. Water and sand both are metaphors of life and its evulationary rituals in this very meaningful poem. Great write, Gillena. Thanks for sharing..........10/10. Regards Naseer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2009

A hunter’s bounty received to honour a life, Of existence, and of predestined creation; Continuing in abeyance, a ritual union of creator, ....ina sense it is ritual union of creator and all depends on cycle only....10 read mine exploitation...miss i miss u and why do we neglect the nature

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Joseph Poewhit 28 August 2009

The seashore solves many problems

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