Dave Alan Walker

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Sands Of Time - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

It was a time gone by
a time with no goodbye
but I left you
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  • (11/28/2011 4:58:00 PM)

    This here is a very touching poem... (Report)Reply

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  • Kaila George (11/23/2011 3:57:00 PM)

    Its a poem of forbidden love...so it seems to me...or am I reading it wrong...as for Denis...hmmm...you could of at least messaged him in private...as for the poem...its quite poetic and lovely....i think its brillant (Report)Reply

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  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/8/2011 1:03:00 PM)

    this seems like a song with the repetition of lines
    and the sand and the wind are so symbolic
    and your asking them when will they come for you is an act of bravery
    seems like you are not afraid to die
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  • (10/7/2011 2:05:00 PM)

    good poem written with great skills.keep it up.you are there (Report)Reply

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  • (10/3/2011 11:33:00 PM)

    nice poetry Berry, i think I understoood a little but not much because you may have a hidden meanings. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/1/2011 11:00:00 AM)

    Nice poem, full of passion. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/1/2011 3:42:00 AM)

    love it chief keep it up boss... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Suvro Bhattacharya (9/29/2011 3:53:00 PM)

    DAVE my dear friend and poet!
    Yes you are a nice painter of feelings!
    Your brush strokes are smooth and dances like a ballet dancer!

    We are proud of you!
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  • Ashley Bachtel (9/29/2011 1:15:00 PM)

    Awe... That's sad hun.. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/28/2011 3:18:00 PM)

    Poem sounds like, a loved one is gone and you wish to go with him, through sand of time, who comes to takes away anything, good job! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Leanne Rhymes (9/28/2011 1:42:00 PM)

    Excellent way of putting it Dave I very much enjoyed it and thankyou for your comments on my poems too. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/28/2011 4:01:00 AM)

    Awesome, fantastic wow am glad we are all into this. Nice work, beautiful piece of art. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/27/2011 2:27:00 PM)

    I felt this. Thank you Dave. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/27/2011 8:23:00 AM)

    Another great write! I'm glad inspiration comes to you so quickly and you are able to produce such beautiful pieces of art. I love this one. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/27/2011 7:53:00 AM)

    well written... filled with the longing of the wind... filled with the hunger to love. like this one a lot! (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (9/27/2011 4:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful! ! i like it, the time bears many thing in our life...i agree we cant live in something we cant go on, so we need to move to the thing we like...and yes God forgives us...I this is something you keep for long time ago i mean, this is what 'Sand of time' that you told me before? ? Hmm i understand how that 'Autumn swing' can be connected with this write...
    Nice writing as always Dave...Sand of time, a story, coincident and meaning all collide to be broader life episode..._Unwritten Soul
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  • (9/27/2011 3:46:00 AM)

    I do not know who you are addressing here. Can you tell me so I can take this poem all in?

    The best to you!
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