Sandstorm Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Sandstorm

Rating: 4.8


She ponders the fidelity
Of the stars and the moon.
And she comes to me
Like an angry sandstorm
Trapped in an hourglass.
Hurling all of her tears
At my dust scrapped heart,
And clouding my vision
With her endless fury.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stan Petrovich 01 October 2011

I agree with S. Mcdonald. Expand and conquer.

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Sean Mcdonald 30 September 2011

I really like it, there's something powerful there. Another verse would be wonderful.

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