Lucky passengers! Are they? Can the Driver find out Satan's wait before the Green light burns? So many questions arise..........Truly a great poem; a poem that makes the readers think and gives rise to so many questions and end-options....This is what Ershad Muzamdar calls as a great poem.....
wonder why death has to be so dramatic sometimes...accidents and natural calamities
make us question god...in this case after deputing satan god seems to have changed his mind...a story well told in just a few lines...great craft sir..10
Inadvertently, a devastation by devil avoided
Haven’t we come across many such occasions? ?
Your presentation of such a graceful incident
Took my heart away to a land of intrepid, by fate.
Let me by virtue of being a technocrat
Mention a wit with which I compare
SATAN – in computer terms…
Security Administrator Tool for Analyzing Networks
Not a devil…but
Driver like the one in your poem
May fail his intensions…and
Network will fail… for sure....; -))
nirdai lakh chahe to kya hota hai, hota wohi hai jo manjure khuda hota hai. now Kesav, i dont know whether i quote correctly, but that's what i infer from your poem- metaphorical, wonderful vivid imagery to drive your point home.
10
Mamta
AS THE OLD SAYING GOES, THE HAND THAT SAVES IS GREATER THAN THE HAND THAT KILLS, WE KNOW! A MESSAGE FOR SATAN & THOSE
FANATICS - HIS FOLLOWERS! 10 +
-RAJ
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