Satan Was Waiting... - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Fortunately, there was no accident, I suppose at the end of the tunnel. (Report)Reply

I enjoy thought prevocing poems... good write Kesav Regards Alf (Report)Reply

beware - beware - beware - that's what this verses means.....10 (Report)Reply

Great accident averted. Refined expression.10 (Report)Reply

excellent! or SOBRESALIENTE! (Report)Reply

a clever symbolic poem shared...well conceived thoughts...........10+++++ (Report)Reply

Lucky passengers! Are they? Can the Driver find out Satan's wait before the Green light burns? So many questions arise..........Truly a great poem; a poem that makes the readers think and gives rise to so many questions and end-options....This is what Ershad Muzamdar calls as a great poem..... (Report)Reply

wonder why death has to be so dramatic sometimes...accidents and natural calamities
make us question god...in this case after deputing satan god seems to have changed his mind...a story well told in just a few lines...great craft sir..10 (Report)Reply

Inadvertently, a devastation by devil avoided
Haven’t we come across many such occasions? ?
Your presentation of such a graceful incident
Took my heart away to a land of intrepid, by fate.

Let me by virtue of being a technocrat
Mention a wit with which I compare
SATAN – in computer terms…
Security Administrator Tool for Analyzing Networks
Not a devil…but
Driver like the one in your poem
May fail his intensions…and
Network will fail… for sure....; -)) (Report)Reply

Kesav, this is so simple
but deep and vivid idea
well done poet
luwi (Report)Reply

meaningful poem to ponder upon................ (Report)Reply

keshavji,
at the end of every tunnel,
there is light......
the green light of nature...
let her win...
you do that through this poem............... (Report)Reply

yes.....
but sometimes decisions are to be made by ourselves....
deep poem.
loved it.
thank you. (Report)Reply

a good driver is one who follows his good instincts..... (Report)Reply

nirdai lakh chahe to kya hota hai, hota wohi hai jo manjure khuda hota hai. now Kesav, i dont know whether i quote correctly, but that's what i infer from your poem- metaphorical, wonderful vivid imagery to drive your point home.

10

Mamta (Report)Reply

that's a good inference Raj...wise...and to the point...thanks (Report)Reply

AS THE OLD SAYING GOES, THE HAND THAT SAVES IS GREATER THAN THE HAND THAT KILLS, WE KNOW! A MESSAGE FOR SATAN & THOSE
FANATICS - HIS FOLLOWERS! 10 +
-RAJ (Report)Reply

Mark, you guessed it right...the train didn't move a bit for there was no Green Signal...thanks (Report)Reply

I guess satan did not win. I believe, though Master's green did not appear, still the emergecy brakes stopped the train with no harm done.
mark (Report)Reply

yeah, very true, not even a leaf moves without His wish.........regards, sir jii..... (Report)Reply