Sea Of Hate! Poem by Eyan Desir

Sea Of Hate!

Rating: 4.9



Monster! he took the life
waters from her heart
on the coral reef
vessels of his sweet crimes rest.

With a vindictive rage
a vicious tidal wave
over flows my heart's gate

The sea of love is dead!
it has been contaminated
with waters of hatred

With the might of a hurricane!
and a destructive blade
my sea comes to make
the vines from his heart

Don't asked for mercy!
the sea of love is dead!
It's time to meet your maker
go to hell with your prayers!


Play with fire and get burned!
provoking a mortal soul
means invoking its evil
and unleashing demons
Living in its chest!

Buckets of laughter
escapes from my mouth
as the sea of hate
smashes! the light from his heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is the most amazing wonderufl well expressed beautifully evil poem i have read in an extremely long time. it's refreshing, let me tell. i love the way you make the words fit together, like life's just one big puzzle and ur putting it together. love it.

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Brittany Jones 10 May 2010

nice pace to your poem keep up the rhythm and good work

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Marieta Maglas 19 March 2010

my sea comes to make the vines from his heart M

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Kesav Easwaran 15 March 2010

'The sea of love is dead! it has been contaminated with waters of hatred'... liked this stanza more...well, how can love thrive in the dead (hatred) sea? good poem...very much emotionally expressive

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Janell Cressman 14 March 2010

this one is intersting, and that is all i can seem to say about it

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Lady Grace 14 March 2010

this piece is expressing strong emotion or expresses hard feelings...nicely done.expresssive...

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